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I Will Never Bow by Roswell-Shepherd

I Will Never Bow

by Roswell-Shepherd


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this is awesome! its way better than what i could do, anyways. :D
okay a critique! here we go!

story: i really really REALLY love the summary you wrote to go along with this. The Rebellion sounds epic, so if you ever start writing it you'll have to tell me. :D it kind of reminds me of The Hunger Games for some reason... i know it was inspired by that Sherlock Holmes quote, but i cant help but think of The Hunger Games. i dont know why. it is an original idea though, so ill give you 4.5 stars for origninality. ;)

picture: it looks awesome! i really like how the blood is splattered on the rock it looks amazing! but you said that schad's executions were bloody and gruesome, and i dont see much blood. i understand if you wanted to keep it semiclean but i would expect more after reading your story

keep up the great work! i highly recommend +watching =Detective-Wolf! she wont disappoint you!
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